This is my semester portfolio:
http://kaelhoughtby.wixsite.com/portfoliofinal
Parent Comments: Kael houghtby Parent: John Houghtby
- What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?I think I liked Kael’s Angry Letter essay. I found it interesting that he made a letter to a company, talking about an issue, and sending it.
- What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?I think Kael can add more detail to his portfolio, it feels a bit too simple to be adding information for his portfolio he learned throughout the semester.
- Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?I think Kael did the best in voice, since I can tell that he is the one writing whichever essay he's writing.
- Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
Kael’s word choice made no sense to me, and I think he could explain his sentence fluency more.
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